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FAITH IN GOD

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Faith in god

Is

Realization of peace, power and security.

 

He can give me peace

If a war is going outside my door.

 

He can secure me,

If I go outside the door.

 

He can give me power,

If one tries to attack me.

 

He can restore my faith in him,

Even if I die…

4 Comments

  1. rajagopal haran says:

    “You block your dream when you allow your fear to grow bigger than your faith.”…..
    great faith…..God Bless You..

  2. krishna says:

    Very elementary…
    Raise your bar…

  3. sandip pol says:

    nice poem.But you have to extend it.

  4. Gion Gion says:

    Aakriti,
    the language needs work and the them needs to be fleshed out.
    Too much repetition in such a short poem.
    May I suggest that the first verse be about what you think Faith is not.
    The subsequent should be about what you have experienced through Faith.
    Then let the reader decide on the examples rather than the author makng some bare statements.
    Just a suggestion to think about,
    Fergus

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