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you and i…..

i wrote this poem during the time i was having a fight with my best-friend.we said a lot of mean things and hurt each other…. but i realised how much i card for her…. and how no matter what i said….. i wouldn’t be able to live without my friend……

We are the same

You and I…..

We hurt each other

We hurt ourselves

We say, it gives us a high…

Misunderstood and alone

Pure-damned souls

We take our chances

We exchange our roles

You maybe the angel

I maybe the demon

Or sometimes,

The other way round even….

The world is round

But it is still not whole

Bits and pieces are missing

From every soul …

The time is running too fast

Or we are too slow…..

But either way, the only way to survive

Is to catch on with the flow

It’s not easy,

But you told me that it’s simple

I wouldn’t care if it’s not,

If it just lets us be there,

To let me see my friend’s pretty dimple.

You once gave me hope

One that now I wish to share

Forgive me for being so selfish

But I always want you to be there

Cause, if you were to die,

I won’t kill myself….

…… I simply wouldn’t have to…..

Cause, you may want to kill yourself

But who will die?

Maybe you…….

…… maybe ……. I ……..

They say your life flashes

When you are near the end

I know I’ve been close

And I now know it to be true

Cause, my life flashed

And all I saw…….was just You……

6 Comments

one of a kind!!!too good bro.sometimes a fight can get the best out of your…your master-piece is a perfect example.keep writing bro.thnx for your appreciation and comments on my work too.
cheerio.

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I loved the line:

But who will die?

Maybe you….

….Maybe… I…

Too deep to appreciate. Lovely !!

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Outpouring of emotions in this one.
Simply written yet so effective

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i luv dis 1 too….i recently fought vid ma frnd..nd therefore it ws lyk reading my mind on paper(comp)

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