FORGOTTEN……FORSAKEN LANDS……

The heavens pour fire

The soil burns in reply

The earth screams in agony

Down comes crashing the sky.

Mother nature pleads for help

But none heed her cry.

The souls burnt black

The hollow shells walk.

Darkness shall strike back

As satan gives a knock

In the harbors of heaven n hell

The demons shall dock.

They say this is my land

Where I shall rule till eternity

The lord has backed away

And doomed me with immortality

I shall see the fall of mankind,

And rot among the skeletons of society.

The mighty kingdom has fallen

In the dark, I see no light

There rises a shriek from the earth itself

As its children do nothing but fight

The moon has waned one last time

And it shall remain one endless dark night.

This is the end of civilization

The bricks of it crumble in the acid rain

Man drinks man’s blood

As if he’s forgotten the pain

Let zeus and satan be gone.

This is my land!

Here, I rock! I rule! I reign!


Look me not in the eye

For I am the bane of man-kind

Vultures shall rip your eyes

And you shall serve me blind.

Neither hope, nor solace

Naught death, not grace

In these lands shall you find.

Fate is the judge, I am the law

Justice and freedom are just lies

I can take out the heart

And make it’s beating stop

In front of their very eyes

For here one needs no heart, no soul

Only lust and anger would suffice.

I rule by sheer power

It is neither evil nor good

By power you survive

And by blade and blood

Have you ever seen death before?

I decide you should.

So you think you are brave

Many do, until they see what is under it’s hood

In his anger, the lord made earth of paradice

I shall create hell on earth

Each mother shall think twice

For every child will be evil from birth

Honesty, valor, souls and emotions

Shall be wiped off, for what they are worth

Humans, snakes, hyenas and jackals ,

Shall chew your bones and grin with mirth.

You can try to speak out, to rebel, to run,

But you are gagged and bound by my

invisible chain…

Those who try to think or threaten

Were, are and will be slain

For none have left and none shall leave

All those who enter my domain

Do not question, my eternal slave

This is my land!

Here, I rock! I rule! I reign!

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Comments

gives the feeling of read/seen ” The Judgement Day” as Apoorv as the hero…gives the chill that if the future is that bleak….well written

The visual imagery very strong….poem flows very well.
Welcome to p4poetry !!

from the dark poet’s kitty! It’s like a theme for a movie in poetic terms…

welcome to p4poetry!

really…..really happy tht my poem was chosen as the poem of the month……. thnks ppl…..

Hearty Congratulations Apoorv!!
Well deserved!!

i am speechless….

A beautiful thought provoking poem…Loved it…..yash

Hey congrats for this being chosen poem of the month. This poem reminded me of Yeats’ Second Coming poem.

Dark, doomsday imagery…well done.

well done….as laways pleasure reading your work. i also posted a poem titled” what is love ?”. if you could spare some time and give your revered views on it.

Congratulations. Marvellous piece.Keep writing.
Anandavalli R Chandran

Strong powerful vision, a brilliant work, honest souls cry anguish of mother earth……, poem with substance. well done

wonderfull great poem

Awesome poem….

what a nice poem… i like it so much

THE MAGICAL FLOW OF WORDS IN YOUR POEM ARE THE REFLECTION OF
YOUR THOUGHTS AND IMAGINATION. COGRATS

DR.RAJU

cheerz n high!!!

Well put to scare one and all. Hope it will never come true.

Congrats!

Loved the strong imagery. Befitting for the world that we live in today. Simple yet powerful!!

A very strong expression of anger and anguish. Keep writing!!!!

what beautiful flow of words! Reflects the grim picture so appropriately. Congratulations!!

Apoorv…What imagery, words, flow, picturisation, content & movement… to climax,…. a fantastic documentary of immenent horror my mind was presenting to me while reading this fantastic poem. An outstanding poem, one in a million. deserves all acclaim and prizes.
Padhkar Dil Bahut KHush Hua aur ghabaraya bhi.

congrats…,
very symbolic poem, quite thought provoking

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