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Because….I Love You…

What if I say

That I love you,

Will you smile at me,

Like you always do…..?

What if I say,

That you are pretty.

Naught knows where god found you,

The angels stare in envy.

What if I tell you,

That I did not sleep last night.

Will you take me in your arms

And hug me tight?

What if I say it, while

Looking into your eyes

Will you believe me then?

Or would you consider them lies?

What if I say

No one can love you more than me

Coz for others you are a lady,

But like eyes for me to see.

What if I say,

without you, I can not live

either I die sans you

or ask for my life and I’ll give.

What if I tell you,

Your smile is like moonshine.

For you I shall bring down the stars,

If only, you could be mine……….

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5 Comments

I guess you proposal must have been accepted after this poem :)

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Inspired write and reads very well….just one suggestion…i think if you make the last second para into the last one…it will have more punch .

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This is a sweet love poem…but i get a feeling that it’s not fresh/unique, you need some difference here to make it stand out!

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I agree with preeti there.a sugar-coated romantic poem anyway.

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amazin yaaa ..!!!

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