Tanka: Snow Shower After Snow

Snow after shower,
Still covering the ground
Although hours past
It is vanished from trees and
snow plough have cleared the roads

Possibly Related poems:

  1. Songs of the Snow
  2. Written in the snow
  3. A Park In My Neighbourhood

Comments

I am reminded of ancient hill songs. Beautiful.

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nice tanka… i think “ground” in line 2 wud b one syllable, not 2… just check it…

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