A Love thats divine….

I wait in silent longing
Under the full moon
Hope in my heart
Desire in my soul
For one gesture
That you may dole
If you dont give me that
Then atleast I have you
In my thoughts
In which I love to get lost…

One of your glance
Puts me in a trance
One of your touch
Gives me an aura so bright
Like bedazzled light
One of your kiss
Is like breathing new life
In a body,dead and rife
Even one of your cruelty
I accept willingly
Have lost all my modesty,
And all my pride
That some may deride
But maybe its a blessing in disguise
Coz it transcends love t’was human
To a love that is divine…

Comments

Absolutely beautiful. lovely. reminds me of Vidyapati’s love poems. First paragraph perfectly captures the longing and the second one the intoxication and elevation of love to a divine level. superb..

gr8 poem yaar….. really nicely written….. i dunno if it was intentional or not but the sensuality in the last para adds to the romance…

dear sir, poetry is also divine. loved reading it narendra nangea

really good

the poem touch the heart

very nice

what a thought

so sweet

simply beautiful and oh soooo romantic. reflects the total fusion in love and the submission thereafter

u have a gr8 understanding/knowledge about love.

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compelling love poetry !
neerada

mind blowing..
every line forces one to think and ponder on d nostalgic memories
gr8 yaa

Its a superb poem on romance and passion . I liked it.

A touching poem with tender feelings. - prem puneet

Gr8 one!!! Every feeling of LOVE well phrased in the same poem - Sunil Mascarenhas

Excellent Work.. Bravo..

At First tihs didnt make Sense.. but then.. reailsed the worth of each Words..

BRAVO….

It has a poetic touch.

Its not that great, you dont have to rhyme dole and soul. I didnt like that much….

Poems that come out of deapths of heart wilh full feel & pouring out love …..how can they be otherwise. Soooo beautiful.
Saikumar

Bahut atcha
Saikumar

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