A Love thats divine….
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Loading ...I wait in silent longing
Under the full moon
Hope in my heart
Desire in my soul
For one gesture
That you may dole
If you dont give me that
Then atleast I have you
In my thoughts
In which I love to get lost…
One of your glance
Puts me in a trance
One of your touch
Gives me an aura so bright
Like bedazzled light
One of your kiss
Is like breathing new life
In a body,dead and rife
Even one of your cruelty
I accept willingly
Have lost all my modesty,
And all my pride
That some may deride
But maybe its a blessing in disguise
Coz it transcends love t’was human
To a love that is divine…
23 Comments
gr8 poem yaar….. really nicely written….. i dunno if it was intentional or not but the sensuality in the last para adds to the romance…
simply beautiful and oh soooo romantic. reflects the total fusion in love and the submission thereafter
Excellent Work.. Bravo..
At First tihs didnt make Sense.. but then.. reailsed the worth of each Words..
BRAVO….
Poems that come out of deapths of heart wilh full feel & pouring out love …..how can they be otherwise. Soooo beautiful.
Saikumar
I am water
Sometimes solid...you can always depend on
Sometimes liquid...fits in anywhere
Sometimes vapor...ephemeral...I am there and then I am gone
Sometimes ice...but can be dissolved by fire
Sometimes swirling ....with passion
Sometimes tranquil ....with still desire
Always flowing....unaware of the destination
Sometimes vivid ....like blue sapphire
Always pure....see your reflection
Always rising ...wanting to go higher
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Absolutely beautiful. lovely. reminds me of Vidyapati’s love poems. First paragraph perfectly captures the longing and the second one the intoxication and elevation of love to a divine level. superb..
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