Dream Land
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Loading ...Walk aside me in my silver dreams
While moonlight shines across the shadowy realms
Wrinkled waters where ripple in resilience
Nights, cold and majestic murmur in silence
Nascent buds frolic in lunar glories
Nested magicians sing nocturnal stories
Come with me to my wonderland as this
Where heavens descend to sprinkle their bliss
Together we will sit amidst the eternal fantasy
Behold the darkness unfold its celestial supremacy
Be with me for once upon the glimmering sand
Of the place I call my beautiful Dream Land
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Beautifully crafted.
My only suggestion in the poem would be to remove ‘where’ in line # 3,6 and 8.It would read better without it…but its completely upto u.You might be having a reason to keep it there
Ok…Personally i would have written
where wrinkled waters ripple in resilience
where heavens descend to sprinkle their bliss
but poetry is so personal and poetic license applicable to all !
You have successfully woven a magical image by the beauty of your words and the imagery used!
Keep writing!
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